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Spew is a good description and like most things spewed this one stinks (comparatively). After Nano, I'm doing a major re-write, trim it down pick up the pace. I think it has the potential of a juicy little melodrama. I just have to cut it down or at least work it through better. Hmmm, you know if I change the characters to originals, change a few details and re work the ending I have plotted, this could be an nice little angst fest to try and shop to the Danielle Steele type crowd. Except I don't know if there is a market for slash romance angst.
Spew is a good description and like most things spewed this one stinks (comparatively). After Nano, I'm doing a major re-write, trim it down pick up the pace. I think it has the potential of a juicy little melodrama. I just have to cut it down or at least work it through better. Hmmm, you know if I change the characters to originals, change a few details and re work the ending I have plotted, this could be an nice little angst fest to try and shop to the Danielle Steele type crowd. Except I don't know if there is a market for slash romance angst.